Hey guys!
So I was nominated by Saya to share my views on Love (in ten lines of four words each):
“Love” is one word
I can’t write about
For to spill ink
I need to understand
What love really is?
My mind tells me
I knew once but
Broken and torn memories
Are better off hidden
In the void within
For to spill ink, was an interesting choice for the task. Any chance you would elaborate as to why those particular words?
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Because the thoughts felt scattered, some perhaps lost some broken, to collect them was painful so what I still had in memory I spilled from mind to page. Does that makes sense? I’m not sure to be honest…
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Thank you for the additional pome. Well done.
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Love is your own reflection
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Indeed
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That was quite cool, Barrira.
-Naima
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Marriage is two parts working together in the same direction. when the direction changes and both move into the new path in harmony, that is close to love
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Wise words from wise William ❤
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What a creative way to meet this task of describing love in ten four-word lines. Sometimes such constraints help to make us even more creative. Great!
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Thank you and yes challenges are always opportunities to push ourselves a little further ^_^
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Exactly yours ..Love.
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Perhaps..
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bravo…loved it…
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Thanks Saya xD
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love is a fish
fear is the sea
and from the boat
one can not see
hope is the bait
there is no guarantee
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