He walks over to her and smiles
She is busy scribbling away
He clears his throat and sits down
She looks up and smiles warmly
He holds her small hands in his
She seems startled by this act
He keeps looking at her quietly
She blushes under his intense gaze
He hopes she would understand
She had always been good at this
He was always short of words
She always had enough for them
He opens his mouth to speak up
She puts her hand on his mouth
He looks at her questioningly
She shakes her head in a ‘no’
He wonders what that means
She beams and leans forward
He sharply exhales surprised
She was always a step ahead
He gently seals their moment
She had been his best friend
He whispers softly “I love you”
She grins “About time, you idiot*
:-)Sweet. Thanks for sharing.
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thanks 🙂
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Awww, that was cute! (Lol) I thought it was gonna get intense but it was a pleasant airports towards the end! ❤
-Naima
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hahah! lets just say I’ve had too much of an intense day to write anything with a lot of feels in it xD
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I enjoy you being all relaxed and set back — once in a while, writing something like this is refreshing and fun 😀
-Naima
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Actually, au contraire lately l’ve forgotten what ‘relax’ means :p however, when you’re too drained you end up writing somethin that wont exhaust you further, I think that’s what happened ❤
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You should be exhausted more often then? (I am just joking :D) Have a pleasant evening, Barrira!
-Naima
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Haha I love your feedback xD
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Anytime 😉
-Naima
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Love it!❤️
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Thanks ❤
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Good one. 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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Nice surprise!
Terrific release of poetic tension.
I smiled in surprise.
Like chimp, I’m afraid…
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xD
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So wonderfully evocative…I can picture the scene in my mind’s eye.
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Thanks ❤
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Nice an sweet
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Thanks 🙂
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That was a great one! so sweet and romantic and then that last line,so good! I had a moment very similar to that with the last man who broke my heart, he finally said I love you and I said the same thing!! how funny is that! too bad he didn’t mean it…
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We write for things that leave marks ❤ be strong you 🙂
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WOMEN! 🙂
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Hahaha xD
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Adorable! This poetry seems like a regency romance I am reading just in a few secs 🙂
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Thanks Izza ^_^
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wow! this one is very sweet great poet ….imagine the wide smile on my face . i always love to read love story like this and you as my hero lol.
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I love how you add the personality of the characters in with the soft and cute poem. I love how the girl kind of steals the moment from him also.
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Thanks Meg, thought I’d try something a little less intense for a change ^_^
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It worked 🙂
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