Dear, try a little harder
You whisper to yourself
You have to go on with
Life struggling as giving up
Isn’t an option it never was
The battle is yours alone to
Fight and the world is yours
To win every day so close
Your eyes and say your
prayer believing in yourself
Somebody has to and you
Will need to stand on your
Own even when you crash
Dust off the scars and move
On with your life with a strong
Smile proving to all those who
Wickedly wait for you to burn out
That you are just not a quitter
You’re a fighter who has won
Battles on grounds on which
People would have surrendered
Even before the wars began
Oooooh…very nice. Beautiful. I really like the capitalization of the first letter of each line. I’ve never tried that and I think I will. Capitalizing gives it some quality I can’t put my finger on. It just reads so well that way. Maybe it’s that it adds a sense of authority…Is it okay to say that? Thank you as always 🙂
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I’ve no idea to be honest, just something I’ve always done automatically 🙂 But yes I think I kinda agree with you there, please go ahead do give it a try too ^_^
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Something to tell yourself daily, yes? I really like the spirit of this, especially the last part in which you fight even when others simply surrender. Cheers =)
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Yes Im swinging from the moon to the sun lol. On the other hand wekeend yayy ❤
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As long as the ups balance the downs you’re in good shape. Happy Weekend. Go out and have fun =)
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The goal has always been “survive” 🙂 oh this is gonna be one those weekends when you take a break from the world and hide under the bed ^_^
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We all need to hide sometimes and have our individual places to do so. Enjoy.
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An essential work
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Thanks John 🙂
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Wow… this is absolutely beautiful you really really captured the emotions well.. I can relate. Thank you 😊
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Im glad 🙂
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Of Course!
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Beautifuly penned, pure inspiration ⭐ !!!~ All the best to you!, Aquileana 😀
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Thanks ^_^
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Wow! That was so good:)
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Thanks Shruti 🙂
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Reblogged this on Mindfire Cantata.
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Very inspirational lines!
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Thank-you 🙂
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That my freind says it all completely and can relate to every word, for ok ones mask may slip now and again, but you straighten it smile and start a brand new day , take care, stay safe
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